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The Phone Doesn't Ring Anymore by ~whenyoumessup:iconwhenyoumessup:



The phone doesn’t ring anymore
Nobody’s calling
I guess this is how it gets
When you can’t stop falling

Over head, over heels,
Rock bottom seems gone
This stand-still, mid-air
Not quite alive, not quite numb

We had no closure
We just left it hanging
After some time it hung itself
While we weren’t watching

The “story not finished”
Had me going on too long
“Meant to be forever”
Was suddenly just wrong

We won an award
For crying out loud!
Holding hands on stage
Weren’t you proud?

Weren’t we perfect?
Or is it just me
Did I get something wrong?
Weren’t we happy?

Sure the fights were real
And we said some things
First hurt, then anger,
Then regret, then friends

Was it ever the solution
To let love go?
Who were you convincing
With that simple “no”?

Now, I let you fly
Like I’m supposed to endure
Let you spread your wings
Let you soar

But what if you fly
To close to the sun
And you burn your wings
And you can’t come home

But I know you aren’t burnt
And I know you’re doing fine
And the sleepless nights
Are only mine

So I’ll dance the nights away
Like I’m supposed to do
And drink ‘till I fall over
Or find somebody new

We’ll flirt a little while
And then I’ll take him home
Sleeping with some random guy
Is better than sleeping alone










(Next morning he’s surely gone
And here I sit, on my floor
There’s just no me without you
And the phone doesn’t ring anymore)
©2006-2009 ~whenyoumessup
:iconwhenyoumessup:

Author's Comments

All I've known
All I've done
All I've found
was leading to this.

I've found the one I've waited for.

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:iconaellawind:
The last line is what hit me most. Certainly some of the stanzas made me edgy..reminders of emotions and feelings.. which is what this poem is definitely full of...

but that is something I'm sure many have felt.. the pain of the phone not ringing anymore.. *sigh* Love it.

--
The human heart has hidden treasures,
In secret kept, in silence sealed.

-Charlotte Bronte
:iconwhenyoumessup:
Oh thank godness somebody wrote!
I was beginning to think no one liked it
but thank you for that nice comment ^^
It's a poem, just like the rest, about love, loss
and all that stuff.
And I'm sorry you relate.
It's sad how so many people have had their heart broken.
I wouldn't wish it upon my worst enemy.

--
Your paper wings got ruined in the rain
Coat hanger halo got rusted
The lace fell off the dress you made
You're the saddest little angel.

& I didn't have the heart to tell you
It's really bad
It's really bad this time.
:iconluchielu:
wow

I mean..

this poem is really really great.
I loved it.

:heart:

--
:blowkiss:
:iconwhenyoumessup:
oh thank you! I'm so happy you liked it.
Haven't really gotten much response on it and I was beginning to worry it sucked :S
you just saved my day ^^

--
"To live would be an awfully big adventure." - Peter Pan
:iconluchielu:
Oh no hunny..

Ur poem is great. I can really relate to this one.
Keep writing..

I enjoy reading ur words.

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:blowkiss:
:iconforbidenxlove139:
wow this is so deep and it is wonderful....sad....i can completely relate from awhile back but this is really really great....idk why you havnt gottem to many responses this is like i said twice already really great =D

--
you luagh because im diffrent i luagh because your all the same
H3@th3r
:iconwhenyoumessup:
thank you doll ^^
That's really nice to hear :glomp:

--
"To live would be an awfully big adventure." - Peter Pan
:iconwhenyoumessup:
orh thank you sweetheart!
Thats the best compliment a writer can get ^^

--
"To live would be an awfully big adventure." - Peter Pan
:iconforbidenxlove139:
no problem!! ;)

--
you luagh because im diffrent i luagh because your all the same
H3@th3r

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